Enhancing Clarity and Strength- Leveraging Peer Review Feedback for Academic Excellence

Enhancing Clarity and Strength- Leveraging Peer Review Feedback for Academic Excellence

This draft recommends the introduction of peanut butter in China. The draft presents important information that the business must consider when establishing in China. The main strength of this draft is the clear demonstration of competence in the key areas that were being examined. The paper shows an understanding of cultural communication and designing organizations in foreign countries. The main limitation is in the citation of key information presented and the lack of clear explanations in some areas of the paper.

Cultural Communication

The country selected for this presentation is China. The draft clearly lists some important demographic characteristics of this country that make it a good target for business. This is an important part of the presentation, as it helps one to understand the country in preparation for the evaluation of the cultural information. However, the draft lacks a clear explanation of the reason behind the selection of some of the communication elements. For instance, the recommendations suggest that multicultural communication needs to be age-based, education-based, and party membership-based. This recommendation is vague and could be improved by stating the reason behind each of the recommendations.

Organizational Structures and Hierarchies

As opposed to the recommendations for communication, the organizational structures and hierarchies have been well-defined with good reason behind the recommendations.  For instance, a directive management structure is recommended because China has a culture that values hierarchy and operational structures. It is also stated that the matrix structure is frowned upon in China, which is a good reason for a business to maintain strict hierarchies in its organization.

Impact of Culture on Negotiations

The explanation of the impact of the Chinese culture on negotiations in the country is satisfactory. The draft begins by explaining the elements of Chinese culture with the likelihood of affecting negotiations for foreign businesses. Following the cultural aspect is a recommended act or behaviour that would improve negotiations. This provides a clear understanding of what foreign businesses can do to prepare to do business with Chinese people.

Recommendation for Product Launch

The draft recommends that the product be launched in China. What strengthens this part of the draft is that it gives the measures that ought to be taken to ensure that the product is a success in China. This means that a reader who needs to make the appropriate decision about the Chinese business environment will be well-guided just by following these instructions.

APA Formatting Guidelines for Citations and References

Very minor formatting errors can be identified in the reference list. For instance, in referencing a book, the title of the book needs to be written in italics as per the APA guidelines. Another limitation that is identifiable in the formatting is the lack of appropriate in-text citations to back up the information that has been presented within the draft.

Comment on the specific feedback questions posted by the author.

This presentation has mainly been well done. The author has achieved competence in most of the objectives, with some of them needing minor improvements. The main improvement that may be needed is ensuring that all recommendations have a clear explanation so that one can understand why the action is being taken. The draft will also be improved if the APA formatting guidelines are followed.

A peer review provides objectivity and a fresh perspective and can be used to add clarity to your work. The feedback you receive encourages self-reflection as you consider how to incorporate these comments to revise and strengthen your work. The end result is a stronger body of work.

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Giving Feedback
When giving feedback, address the following criteria using the peer review feedback form provided in the resources section:

Identify the strengths of the work first, then identify areas that would benefit from expansion or clarification.
Comment on how well the draft analyzes the cultural communications that affect international business in the country selected.

Enhancing Clarity and Strength- Leveraging Peer Review Feedback for Academic Excellence

Comment on how well the draft evaluates various patterns of organizational structures and hierarchies.
Comment on how well the draft distinguishes how culture affects methods of negotiation in international business in the country selected.
Comment on whether or not the draft recommends launching the product in the selected country.
Comment on how well the draft complies with APA formatting guidelines for citations and references
Comment on the specific feedback questions posted by the author.
As you respond to each of the items above, provide specific examples from the paper of what is working or not working for you. Also, avoid focusing your comments on issues of grammar and copy editing, but if there are glaring issues within the work, you can mention them. Remember to be constructive and respectful in your comments. The bulk of your feedback should be about how well the learner is achieving the objectives of the project.