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Feedback Journal: Graduate Writing II

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Feedback Journal: Graduate Writing II

Week 4: Writing Feedback Log

What kind of feedback would you like to receive from your instructor? On what aspect of writing would you most like to receive feedback?”

I want feedback on the clarity, organization, and logical flow of my writing, particularly in academic arguments and thesis development. I would also appreciate guidance on strengthening my scholarly tone, effectively incorporating peer-reviewed evidence, and improving APA formatting. Additionally, feedback on MEAL paragraph structure and smooth transitions would be helpful: Feedback Journal: Graduate Writing II.

Date Piece of writing (title, description, etc.) Area where excelled The issue to work on Resources to review Plan for revision / future writing

 

Optional: Questions to ask the instructor or the Writing Center.
March 10th Executive Summary (W2A2) Identified healthcare issues and stakeholders well. I needed more details on the specific stakeholders involved in implementing the project. Walden Writing Center: MEAL Paragraphs (https://academicguides.waldenu.edu/writingcenter/paragraphs/organization )

 

 Add a sentence defining the purpose in the introduction. Use subheadings to delineate each section of the paper for better flow.
March 17th Nurse Leader Economist Discussion Provided a good discussion of general healthcare concerns. Did not fully cover the three healthcare concerns, fundamental economic issues, or economics of the proposed solution. Walden Writing Center: Grammar and Mechanics.

(https://academicguides.waldenu.edu/writing/grammar )

 

 Revise the discussion to cover all three required components: healthcare concerns, economic issues, and proposed solution economics. Use subheadings to organize each section.
March 18th MEAL Paragraph Submission Provided a thoughtful reflection on the paraphrasing process. The paragraph was not labeled or organized correctly, with each MEAL part separated. Walden Writing Center: Academic Argument.
(https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/books/NBK573918/ )		 Revise the paragraph to clearly label Main Idea (M), Evidence (E), Analysis (A), and Link (L). Ensure cohesiveness in the final submission.
March 21st Workshop Assignment Demonstrated good writing with minor issues. Minor errors were noted in writing mechanics and structure. APA 7th Edition Manual, Page 47 (Headings) (https://apastyle.apa.org/style-grammar-guidelines/paper-format/headings ) Locate resources addressing the identified issues, correct errors, and add links to the feedback journal for future reference.

Optional: Questions to Ask the Instructor or Writing Center

  1. How can I effectively transition between MEAL paragraph components to improve cohesiveness?
  2. What are the best practices for applying APA 7th edition headings in complex papers?
  3. How can I improve my ability to integrate healthcare economics concepts more clearly into my discussions?

Reflection and Future Goals

Reflecting on weekly feedback helps identify common writing challenges and promotes continuous growth. By addressing paragraph structure, writing mechanics, healthcare economics, and organization through subheadings, future writing will be clearer, better structured, and more professional. Continued engagement with writing resources and instructor feedback will refine these skills further.

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Question

Feedback Journal

In this ongoing Assignment, continue building a repository of personalized writing feedback and resources to apply to your writing development.

Remember, this is a living, breathing document—customize it with resources and updates each and every week.

To prepare for this Assignment:

By Day 7
Using the Feedback Journal from the Learning Resources, record any writing feedback you have received in this course and/or your other courses.

You must have at least two rows completed.

Submission information

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